My crappy stand-up...

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My crappy stand-up...

Postby mexicanjunior » Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:35 pm

My crappy stand-up at open mic night at Hyena's. By the time I got onstage, the crowd had pretty much dissipated and were completely indifferent to what was going on on-stage. I was just glad I didn't mess up any of the punchlines or dry heave on-stage. Will probably be a 1 and done deal, can scratch it off the bucket list now. Be warned, this set is VERY NSFW!

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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby Castor Troy » Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:41 pm

Good schtick. I didn't realize you had a Kinect. :lol:
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby mexicanjunior » Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:44 pm

BTW, it was my first time on-stage, so delivery was spotty at best...
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby CastielTheFallen » Thu Jun 09, 2011 10:41 pm

Memorize your shctick and be more enthusiastic and you could be slayin' em ;)
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby Pwolf » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:57 am

Lookin good MJ.

need to work on your execution a bit i think and what Joey said, be more enthusiastic like you want to be there. Also make sure your set is relevant to the audience. The kinect/quarter joke was great but maybe a generation too late. Keep it up :P
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby guy07 » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:19 am

A 12 year old ...?
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby CastielTheFallen » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:50 am

also yeah tight as a 12 year old may not work so well on audiences when you're first starting out...gotta save jokes that dirty until you get some rep behind u for being a silly ass
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby Castor Troy » Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:53 pm

Big Dave hasn't changed.
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby mexicanjunior » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:42 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys, will probably be awhile before I get back on-stage but I will definitely take your suggestions to heart, especially the enthusiasm levels...
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Re: My crappy stand-up...

Postby Kitsuner » Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:15 pm

Arashinome wrote:also yeah tight as a 12 year old may not work so well on audiences when you're first starting out...gotta save jokes that dirty until you get some rep behind u for being a silly ass

See, I liked the follow-up line about not owning a wrench, but you said it so quietly, I almost missed it the first time. You had some good schtick in there though, so keep at it, dude! :up:
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