Memories Of A Distant You MEP [We Are Full Up People]

[Angelyco]

I asked for it last time but you never sent it to me

[Inan]

code send it to me

[Kousaka]

I'd also like to see your beta, Code. ^^

I have to start working on fixing my beta.

[Kenzichu]

*shots up Code, then blows the smoke off the gun*
beta.
*walks away*

[TwilightChrono]

Sorry I've been away guys. Severe computer problems have kept me away. just got my computer to turn back on. I'm going through my inbox now for the betas.

I am going to have to relinquish my part to someone else until I can get my editor installed again. In the meantime I will just coordinate from the sidelines until I can start editing again.

I'll get back to you guys on my beta review in a lil while after I watch them.

EDIT:

Kenzichu:

I must say I am thoroughly impressed by this beta. You've come such a long way since you joined the org. And in such a short amount of time I might add. The beta as a whole is very easy on the eye's. Though I do think that some of the fades around the middle mark of the Beta could use a lil tightening of sorts. Like maybe drag a few of the fades out so that it fades into the next scene a little slower. Really, all the fades add a nice touch to the track, though I do think some of them go by a little fast and could use a little lengthening. Other than that I have no real grief's with this track. keep up the good work.

Code:

The beta is too short for me to honestly give a decent opinion. Though, I think the beginning could use a little lip sync since that part of the song is just a little bit of talking. I think some lip synch like the characters are talking to each other would help accentuate the track more and give a better flow. The quality is great and I LOVE me some Angel Beats! No problems with flow other than the beginning. It almost killed it for me. I know the story you are trying to tell and I think it's great, but I think some lip synch at the beginning would work out better than the current scene that you DO have there. Other than that. Nothing to complain about. Keep it up.

The other beta I received is 234 MB's and I really don't have the time to download that one, so if you could please dim down the size of the file or ask someone else to help with the reducing it would help a lot. And I can download it faster.

As for the next beta deadline, you guys have until Sunday to turn in your next beta. I WILL update the initial post now with up to date info regarding the states of everyone's tracks. Keep it coming guys. Your all doin great. For those of you who haven't turned in a beta, I really hope to expect to see your beta's this Sunday.

[Kenzichu]

wow..that was unbelievably kind. Thank you so much. I'll lengthen some parts of the fade, after rematching it, I agree some need to be longer. I also wanna change the shot of the sky. I think another video overlay will work.
I'll send in a corrected beta tonight.

[Angelyco]

I think I can at least get a first beta started by Sunday. I don't think I'll have a full beta yet, I still have several episodes to go through.

[Kenzichu]

lol i forgot to post this last night, I sent the corrected beta.

[Taite]

According to my sent messages, I sent you my beta over 2 weeks ago. Want me to send it again?
And for anyone else, I still have my first beta ready, so just let me know. Also, feel free to send me a beta for testing, I'm in the mood for critiquing :p

Kenzichu's Crit:
Sorry it's so late o_O

But anyhoo, I really liked it o: I'm such a sucker for Clannad, so I thought it was really sweet. Loved the scene selection. Happiness makes me happy
I honestly don't have many complaints. My only suggestions would be that in the beginning, when you have the blur and the grayscale, I'd use keyframes and make them fade back to nothing. The way it stands now looks a little choppy when it changes from the blurry frame to the regular scene.
But that's it. Keep it up

[Kenzichu]

Yeah send it again.
Also, I did change that part in the beginning, I didn't really like how the blur came out so i just got rid of it. Although i did keep the gray scale. I agree with you, it did look choppy. I think it's better now.