Memories Of A Distant You MEP [We Are Full Up People]

[TwilightChrono]

Carly, I love the new beta. Got a much better flow/feeling.

1) Gett rid of the greent ext and just leave the white ones. Looks better and more cohesive. There a bit work on read head's first make. It needs atad more cleaning up.
2) The last bit with the flickering black/white and color looks kind of iffy. I'd go with one or the other or a different scene.

Otherwise, I love it.

Who wants my beta tonight?

MMMEEEEE!! *Rasies Hand* OOOOHHHH OOOOHHHH PICK ME!! MEEEE!!!!

OH and Kenzichu. I'll mark you down for the last bit. Since you just joined, I'll give you an extended deadline. 2 weeks since you just started. If you want to turn beta's in here and there for review along the way feel free. I actually encourage that.

[CodeZTM]

Might be tomorrow afternoon instead. xD

I just can't seem to get the last bit of it right, and I WANT IT TO BE SHEER PERFECTION.

[TwilightChrono]

Might be tomorrow afternoon instead. xD

I just can't seem to get the last bit of it right, and I WANT IT TO BE SHEER PERFECTION.

I wants beta NOA! XD *Bounces up and down*

You let someone else see it XD I think........

Kenzichu. get the main part out of the way before the credits. Worry about the credits after you have finished the main part of your track. I don't want the credits to be too simple. We can give you feedback on credits ideas as well. I got a nice one kickin around in my head right now.

[Kenzichu]

okay ^_^~! Although like i said I plan to edit the whole track (even if all of it isn't used) Tomorrow I will be out of commission completely, but i should be able to finish a beta asap.

[TwilightChrono]

I have my beta ready for testing. Who wants it? XD

[CodeZTM]

Gimmeh.

[TwilightChrono]

Gimmeh.

Sent. Lemme know what you think.

[CodeZTM]

OMG. THE COLORS ARE ALL WEIRD AND RUIN THIS TRACK TO THE POINT OF IT BEING UNWATCHABLE. SHAME TC. SHAME!!!!!!!!!!

Spoiler :

In reality, I really like it. Awesome flow. The white flashes around 8-12 kind of is distracting. I'd like to see it [and the rest of the track] without it.

The flash beats at around 8-12 being so close together looks ilke ther'es no scene shift and kind of looks like the same scene 3 times.

17-19 is weridly paced, at least for me.

The ending was a tad slow, but I assume that's for transitions to work themselves in.

Good track. Cute combo.

SHAME. :O

[CodeZTM]

OMG. THE COLORS ARE ALL WEIRD AND RUIN THIS TRACK TO THE POINT OF IT BEING UNWATCHABLE. SHAME TC. SHAME!!!!!!!!!!

Spoiler :

In reality, I really like it. Awesome flow. The white flashes around 8-12 kind of is distracting. I'd like to see it [and the rest of the track] without it.

The flash beats at around 8-12 being so close together looks ilke ther'es no scene shift and kind of looks like the same scene 3 times.

17-19 is weridly paced, at least for me.

The ending was a tad slow, but I assume that's for transitions to work themselves in.

Good track. Cute combo.

SHAME. :O

[TwilightChrono]

Not that I've re-watched it a few times, the few color bleed transition I did [look like white flashes] do get on the nerves a little lol. At least the majority of them. the part where they are all staring in disbelieve to the beat of the song is probably the only part that looks good with the white flashes. Just looks right, ya know?

Do you think I should go ahead and remove a majority of the flashes and replace them with fades or with something else?

Also, the end with the camera shutter snapping open is for the transition into the next track.

That one part you said looks like the same scene after the transition, it's not the same scene. It just happened to be a shot of a closer angle so that it would show her face up close as she got up. it just transitioned so well that it looked like the same scene lol. I'll see what I can do about that.

I'm glad you thought the flow was good. Was kinda going for the Cutesy/Jealousy bit.