
Pretty simple yeah...not one of my best works but hope you enjoy it nonetheless ^^


OropherZero wrote:<3 this vid, btw is this song popular or something? Seem to hear it all the time in the supermarket. Anyway just some small quality issues here and there but I liked the scene selections.


Code wrote:Well, I can safely say I had several different concepts planned out for this song that never got off the ground. And I can safely say this one blew all of them out of the water.
1) Lip Flap was distracting,and in this particular series and in those particular scenes, it would have been pretty easy to mask them out. Try that in the future perhaps?
2) Beat sync in some areas of high drums was too fast and hard to keep up with. I applaud you for making this romance song more high paced than the song actually is and thus more entertaining to watch, but some areas were just too fast and hitting EVERY drum beat isn't always necessary.
3) The grey thing effect
4) The climax was actually... Well kind of anti-climatic. xD and I mean right after 2:35. You set us up with that scene of all scenes and move on to more random scenes. THATS WHEN YOU PUT THEM HAVING SMEXY KISSES! xD Lol, kididng. IT wasn't too bad afterwards, but I was just hoping for something with more of an effect on me.
5) I wasn't too keen on the white flashes. I mean, in SOME areas they were effective, but in some drum beats using white flashes and using black flashes elsewhere just kind of combined badly. This is more pertainit around the 3 minute mark both before and after it.
Overally, it was a nice and cute AMV exploring a cute series in a cute and interesting way, if not a little too oversynced. =D
The scene selection was nice,and you hit the overall feel of the song VERY well. Using David Archuleta to make something cutsey isn't all that hard, but you blew this out of the water.
/mehlikes


OropherZero wrote:<3 this vid, btw is this song popular or something? Seem to hear it all the time in the supermarket. Anyway just some small quality issues here and there but I liked the scene selections.
Code wrote:Well, I can safely say I had several different concepts planned out for this song that never got off the ground. And I can safely say this one blew all of them out of the water.
1) Lip Flap was distracting,and in this particular series and in those particular scenes, it would have been pretty easy to mask them out. Try that in the future perhaps?
2) Beat sync in some areas of high drums was too fast and hard to keep up with. I applaud you for making this romance song more high paced than the song actually is and thus more entertaining to watch, but some areas were just too fast and hitting EVERY drum beat isn't always necessary.
3) The grey thing effect
4) The climax was actually... Well kind of anti-climatic. xD and I mean right after 2:35. You set us up with that scene of all scenes and move on to more random scenes. THATS WHEN YOU PUT THEM HAVING SMEXY KISSES! xD Lol, kididng. IT wasn't too bad afterwards, but I was just hoping for something with more of an effect on me.
5) I wasn't too keen on the white flashes. I mean, in SOME areas they were effective, but in some drum beats using white flashes and using black flashes elsewhere just kind of combined badly. This is more pertainit around the 3 minute mark both before and after it.
Overally, it was a nice and cute AMV exploring a cute series in a cute and interesting way, if not a little too oversynced. =D
The scene selection was nice,and you hit the overall feel of the song VERY well. Using David Archuleta to make something cutsey isn't all that hard, but you blew this out of the water.
/mehlikes
Rubeeh wrote:liked it alot <3
diegao94 wrote:Pretty simple video. I quite like it, but the white flashes make me a bit of discomfort.
Radiant_mt wrote:Synced very well in some parts, others not so much.
Nice story.
Alright flow.
Over all, a A-O-K video
Bakadeshi wrote:whats with you and only making Toradora vids for AUN hmm? (not that i'm complaining, I quite liked this video, and I'm a toradora fanboy anyway ;p)
I agree with code on the speedups, some of them felt a bit too fast, but thats pretty much only thing that bothered me. You've got a good feel for romancy stuff, i've liked everything you've done with the genre so far ;p



Niotex wrote:<3 ToraDora.. But somehow it doesn't feel like you did it justice to me. Aside from the technical things already mentioned it just felt flat and stale at times. From a editing as well as a story progressing standpoint.
Still despite that all it was cute none the less.

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