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Re: Empty Motion

Post by BurningLeaves » Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:06 am

I had no idea what was going on here... but I liked it. You really showed tons of effort, I don't think I'd ever have the patience to do that much masking. I thought the sync was great the only thing I didn't like was the haruhi dance scene/ lucky star cheerleaders... It's like I'm getting into the video... getting into it then aww no not that scene again, no real story line to speak of... or correlation between anime/scenes that I could pick up but there was so much eye candy going on I didn't really care... Awesome work

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Re: Empty Motion

Post by JadeCharm » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:26 pm

AMAZING!! :shock:

i wish i would have the patience to do that much masking
hats off!
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Re: Empty Motion

Post by Cenit » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:32 pm

Cool Stuff :up:

Mostly kind of pointless/random, but i had fun.
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Re: Empty Motion

Post by Vlad G Pohnert » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:44 pm

And I thought I was insane... Good to see there is someone even more :up:

Now it just needs to be sent to a particular contest :wink: :wink:

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Re: Empty Motion

Post by kenisama » Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:55 pm

I'm in utter awe... I can't even imagine how to begin to put together something like that. So many things going on :shock:

nice work!
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Re: Empty Motion

Post by FortKaze » Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:44 pm

:up:
love it!!!

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Re: Empty Motion

Post by Kireblue » Thu Jul 02, 2009 9:20 am

This was an awesome amv. Its Truly entertaining. So much is going on at the same time that I found myself saying "Woah!, what was that? OH MY GOD, I think I just missed something. Wait....What? OH Man, did I just see that?" I don't think I have to tell you just how AMAZING this amv is. Its obvious that you really put a piece of you heart and soul into it. Just looking at the pictures that you uploaded of your project file is enough to make me want to cry.

The only thing that I can say is that at points, it was a little hard to follow this amv. This amv really has a unique way of jerking you back and forth though all 70+ anime you used in the video. I'm not really saying that this is a bad thing, it just has a tendency to cause my brain to overload LOL.
But seriously, this is a 5/5 star amv. And since it is so much higher than my current skill level, I don't think that I can offer you any advice to improve it. But something definitely feels missing from your amv. I can't put my finger on it, but if you can fix it, I think that you can make this video into one of those few amvs that I feel deserves a 6/5

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Re: Empty Motion

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:24 pm

Okay, I am really torn. I watched it at least five times to try and like it (like it happened with AotO after i watched it about three times, it stopped being seizure-inducing).

On one hand, we have lots of great masking here, lots of effort, quality (especially after fixing the AR) and movement.

On the other hand, it's clearly oversynced (the sync doesn't fit at times. You can't deceive me by "throwing in so much stuff that it has to be synced". It IS out of sync at times.), and the pace is... constant, which is its main flaw (see recent Bakadance to see a nice work with pacing). You can't make 4 minutes full time action vid and think it'll keep attention.

Well, you can. It's called AotO. But that one has lyrics sync and no (unfitting, IMO) fanservice.

Don't takeme bad, I REALLY think that it's a solid piece of work and I REALLY see that it must've taken ages, but it's just... bland. Empty, with a bad motion/pacing.

3/5, mainly for the effort.

Sorry again.
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Re: Empty Motion

Post by Infinity Squared » Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:02 pm

Mmm... yeah, I do somewhat agree with Nya-chan. Top scores for effort, but as for an actual direction, I can't say I found one. Opinion time.
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Re: Empty Motion

Post by dazza1008 » Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:48 am

I liked it! :) The effects were striking, and it all fitted together nicely. I didn't like the writing on the screen at about 0.40, though. Also had no idea what was happening. I assume there was no lyric sync. Think the "smash" effect was used too much (1.23) and the 4:3 aspect ratio looked weird at 1.25.

But overall, there was good continuity and it was enjoyable. :)

EDIT: whoops, reading other replies and I realised I saw the LOCAL version. Please ask the mods to delete it? (put in a request to have the video deleted, and give details. Hopefully they'll allow you to reupload. Happened to me before. )

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