Midori No Hibi Beta

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Midori No Hibi Beta

Postby AkoProductions » Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:03 pm

http://tinyurl.com/cpextl

Yup, it's my first Midori No Hibi beta!

Make sure to rate, comment, and subscribe!

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Re: Midori No Hibi Beta

Postby dazza1008 » Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:17 pm

I can't believe you used Linkin Park with Midori no Hibi. XDDDD Looking at him, I guess it does fit with the violence, even though I thought it was a fun and romantic anime.

I hate YT - the blocking (quality of the footage) was terrible.


0.28-0.31 the slow punches don't seem edited. Beatsynced would be better. It's almost beatsynched.

Um... "the voice in the back of my head" ... I really don't think the footage where he gets hit in the back of the head really fits. Too literal. But after that does.

"And not just everything" - the lipsync for "and not just every" was fine, but the mouth stopped moving for "thing" You need one more mouth movement.

OK, cheers!
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Re: Midori No Hibi Beta

Postby Sonydjsnmix » Sun May 24, 2009 2:35 pm

Need to sync with the beats better
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