1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

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1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby dazza1008 » Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:44 am

This is a new style for me - I wanted to make "Kryptonite" about Matt from Death Note, but I had to rely on images because there isn't a lot of footage. To make it more interesting, I combined as much as possible with the anime footage. People who know Death Note would get the most out of it, due to storyline associations of the images. There's more info in the description.

I get bored with simple slideshows, and I don't know whether the result is ultra-tacky, or whether some bits worked.

I really only want specific points for improvements. I'm not after praise here, and I don't mind if it's all negative as long as specifics are mentioned, because I'm here to learn. General like/dislike of it just isn't that helpful, and you can skip the encouragement/pleasantries. If someone could mention the exact place/time in the AMV and even give a suggestion on how it would be improved, I'd really appreciate it. :up:



I'll leave my op after I get mine, and I'll try to match the effort/detail you put into it. ^^
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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby Vax » Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:03 am

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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby Derudo » Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:39 am

ok... ill try to bite this too... ^^ op will be in 1-2 days if you can wait...


pls op this one
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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby pharaoh » Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:06 pm

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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby dazza1008 » Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:34 pm

dazza1008 wrote:


Thanks Vax, your op's up. :P Thanks for the detail in yours.



EDIT: Now that I've read yours in detail and replied to it, it does seem more specific than mine. ^^; If you want more detail on a particular part, just ask and I'll reply here.
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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby Derudo » Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:41 am

op is up :)
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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby pharaoh » Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:00 pm

your op is up up up up :up:
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Re: 1:1, first 5, Matt from Death Note "Kryptonite" slideshowAMV

Postby dazza1008 » Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:10 am

Thanks pharaoh and derudo - your ops are up now too. :D

Just so you know, I didn't read the op you gave me until after I opped yours (but I did skim it to see how much text you wrote). Thanks and cheers. :)
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