Well you butchered the quality quit a bit, but it's only a beta. Well my expirience and my feelings told me by looking at color saturation that your source is probably not DVD
Well Quality aside. You didn't catch the feelings of the song anyhow. Seriously it really looks like a rushed job just to get the spot in the mep. Well your scene choice is if I can say that like that now: horrible actually. You had movement when it wasn't needed and kinda still frames when it needed movements. And seriously you just ignored the drums most of the time which is bad. I mean i dont need heavy drum sync or something, but ignoring everything is also not good. So this one is a no, unless you can really catch the feel of the song and that would need a total rework of the track. And next time try to send me a decent quality one. And uncompressed audio makes me also believe you have no clue to compress. A good thing was that the anime fits the song
ugh first part was a big NO! No movement just cross dissolve, blegh. Really idk know if Samurai Champloo would fit the song anyhow (Yes I saw SC and i liked it). Well anyway next was a whole lot of black >_>. I don't really like the next part! I saw cuts, a mask, and black flashes. But nothing really catched the emotion of the song well. Seemed also just like a rushed job. Also a no go for this one.
So yeah, I'm not trying to offend anyone here, I'm just setting my expectations for this mep high. So well you are free to send another beta for the track other people also! Good Luck.
00:11 please get rid of the LipFlap here. 00:16 hmm this bright effect looks kinda weird and there is a short time nothing on screen here, kinda starnge. Same as before the bright thingy at 00:28. 00:06; 00:36 Get rid of the ugly frame-blending on these two spots >_> Other than that it is a go from me, well I like your Karas part more atm and I would have loved to see you use Burst Angel but well it can't be changed....