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Postby prYzm » Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:28 pm

Shingo.rs wrote:http://www.uploading.com/files/JK1FWWIR/meptest.wmv.html

he is a link of what i have so far.....
its a really small 4.3 meg file... the lipsyncing needs more.. syncing and i have to edit out subs..
for some reason the speed on this site is slow.. it should only take about 1.5 mins to download at 50k


er, unless those are soft subs (which im pretty sure they're not) i dont know how you're going to edit them out. are you using dl'd footage? cause it kinda looks like it, tho that might just be cause its so small/wmv format (which is fine for a first beta and the quality may be good later for you, just something to consider).
as to your video heres the things i notice immediatly:
you really do need to fix up some of that lip syncing, some of it seems ok, but some of it is quite obviously off, the main one you should look at tho is 0.09 - haruhi's head is moving in this frame to repeat frames, looks very very wrong, its not just the mouth moving so you cant move it around like that, if it was me, id use one constant motion of the head and use masking to sync the mouth, will be hard but if u want that scene its the only way i can think to do it
next major point id use, is you completly overuse the multi-screen footage. like 2/3 of ur clips are using the multi-screen haruhi stuff, its a good effect and works well, but you shouldnt make an entire vid using it :/
just my initial impressions, i know i didnt go into any great detail


Darkened Soul wrote:It comes to an abrupt ending so it screws up the flow at the end >.<


eh, urs is harder cause its only 12 seconds :P what u've got is actually quite good so far. its difficult on impressions cause i can see multiple ways you could be building a story off this. a question tho, this isnt the start of ur segment is it? cause it looks like you would need something going before that for it to make sense, cause theres no sense of character development in those scenes. the only other thing i look at is @ 0.08 is the PAR screwed up therE? the girls head looks abnormally large O_o. other than that look forward to seeing a larger beta :up:

and a question for both of you, you're making it the proper size later right? -__ small vids ftl
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Postby Shingo.rs » Thu Jan 03, 2008 12:30 am

it will be the right size.. all those things you said are right.. i can cut and resize the video accordingly... and yes the actual quality is suffice.
i just really needed to know if it was the "right" direction.
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Postby prYzm » Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:01 am

hmmm.... ok ill point out that my sync is way off cause i threw this together fairly quickly (in my terms... i edit slow -_-) but heres the first 30ish seconds of my track

http://www.mediafire.com/?8gzyog2zjt1

edit: i should mention if anyone wants to comment on my video go for it, as i stated im aware that the sync is off and ill fix that once ive completed the track (its a beta, so im just generalising atm) apart from that be as brutal as u want
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Postby GH » Thu Jan 03, 2008 4:49 pm

what u've got is actually quite good so far. its difficult on impressions cause i can see multiple ways you could be building a story off this. a question tho, this isnt the start of ur segment is it?

Thanks,and yeah,it was suppose to be :sweat:
the only other thing i look at is @ 0.08 is the PAR screwed up therE? the girls head looks abnormally large O_o.

Hmm..Nope,It's probably because I had to crop off a subtitle and it got a little screwy,and the Anime actually has pritty sucky animation in the first place,but I'll see what I can do.
and a question for both of you, you're making it the proper size later right? -__

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Postby Rapture** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:01 pm

Okay,in a month I'll need to see everyone's betas,so be sure to upload it a day before the deadline.
:D I like laughter ;DD
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Postby GH » Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:36 pm

so be sure to upload it a day before the deadline.

Upload..A MEP Track beta? O.o
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Postby Full Metal Sempai » Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:51 pm

Darkened Soul wrote:
so be sure to upload it a day before the deadline.

Upload..A MEP Track beta? O.o


What else could he mean?? :)
Anyway,my first beta is ready(45 seconds).Just need to upload it and I'll send the link one of the following days.
On another note(and I'm sure Rapture will curse me one day 8-) ) I changed yet again the anime source and the song.

Anime:Nodame Cantabile
Song:Here's to the night
Artist:Eve 6

And this is final,don't worry.I couldn't bring myself to watch Air again so I deserted back to well-known footage... :D :D
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Postby GH » Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:52 pm

What else could he mean?? :)

O.o

Betas...to the Org?!
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Postby prYzm » Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:59 pm

Darkened Soul wrote:
What else could he mean?? :)

O.o

Betas...to the Org?!


nono upload ur beta to a free filesharing service like the one u used previously and post the link here (or pm to rapture) for download
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Postby GH » Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:02 pm

prYzm wrote:
Darkened Soul wrote:
What else could he mean?? :)

O.o

Betas...to the Org?!


nono upload ur beta to a free filesharing service like the one u used previously and post the link here (or pm to rapture) for download

That's what I thought. I was like..wtf? xD
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Postby GH » Wed Jan 09, 2008 10:51 pm

Sorry for double posting,But the strangest thought just came up on me.

Well...

I jsut started editing a random song,with a random anime,for no apparent reason,and Its like drama/romantic,etc.,like the theme of this mep,and I was wondering If I could pick up 2 tracks? If not 2,could I possibly replace my old track?

Because..My new beta seems more smoothely edited,and I just plain out enjoy it for some reasom. =]

What do you all think of it,is it better then my last beta(which the download link for my last one is 1-2 pages back)

Here's my newer one:

http://www.mediafire.com/?7goex1yjbb4

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The Lips that move..arent meant to match with the words,its the girl crying and regreting stuff,etc. Its hard to tell,but jsut tell me which you like better. Because the Voices of a Distant Star was better edited,and took ALOT more time,and it was good. But this one really caught my eye for some reason,tell me what you think.

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UPDATE//

Here's my old beta:

http://mihd.net/pj7qbr

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UPDATE//

I just put mine up on youtube,but its extended to like..31 seconds,to lazy to file host it right now xD

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Et2KD-foC74
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Postby prYzm » Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:04 am

Darkened Soul wrote:
I jsut started editing a random song,with a random anime,for no apparent reason,and Its like drama/romantic,etc.,like the theme of this mep,and I was wondering If I could pick up 2 tracks? If not 2,could I possibly replace my old track?



Rapture** wrote:Since I think few editors would like to have few tracks,then I'll make space for 18 tracks (2 tracks per editor allowed). 1:40 minutes(100 secs) time limit for each track. If I don't have all spots filled by the time new year comes,I'll just close open spots,and will continue with the number of tracks signed up.


shouldnt be a problem

as to ur beta, i like it
needs some fixing up but has a nice idea to it (and i love that song -_-)
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Postby Neverend » Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:20 pm

I might change my anime to kanon.. my kanon videos seems to be really good with the romanance/drama stuffy..

but im not sure yet, could be fun to try 5cm.. il tell u next week!
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Postby GH » Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:56 pm

prYzm wrote:
Darkened Soul wrote:
I jsut started editing a random song,with a random anime,for no apparent reason,and Its like drama/romantic,etc.,like the theme of this mep,and I was wondering If I could pick up 2 tracks? If not 2,could I possibly replace my old track?



Rapture** wrote:Since I think few editors would like to have few tracks,then I'll make space for 18 tracks (2 tracks per editor allowed). 1:40 minutes(100 secs) time limit for each track. If I don't have all spots filled by the time new year comes,I'll just close open spots,and will continue with the number of tracks signed up.


shouldnt be a problem

as to ur beta, i like it
needs some fixing up but has a nice idea to it (and i love that song -_-)

Alright >=]

Thanks
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Postby Full Metal Sempai » Fri Jan 11, 2008 6:46 pm

My turn now: 8-)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/e4miku

Any comments are appreciated. :D :D
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