Kinematics wrote:[Lloyd9988] The Online AMV Iron Chef Tournament v4.0
Starts too early. Have a good 4 seconds of silence before the first rumble, probably shouldn't be more than 2.
Contrast/saturation levels at 0:23 are way too high.
Color tone impacts to match the beat from 0:25 onwards worked well, especially for transitioning to full color view for the video.
0:42-0:43 -- way too dark
Some ugly artifacting in 0:43-0:45 (possibly source?)
1:28 -- too bright
... I *really* coulda done without the eye removal surgery.. >.>
This video has a slightly different take on the "We're all here 'cause we lost control" portion of the lyric, where 'lost control' is past rather than present tense; ie: penance for past failure, rather than justification for current violence. However it only seems to hold onto that theme for a portion of the video, and falls back to the standard interpretation in the latter half. I think that split focus is what weakens your video the most, as there's not enough strength and focus in either half (after the introductory segments).
Yeah, lol, I pretty much agree with everything, especially with the last one.
i.e. I wanted to focus on that story of losing control in jail but I guess I lost my main focus on the story or I couldn't find the right scenes?? Idk, but that was the part I was really struggling with was the later half. xD Anyway, thanks for your analysis, I'mma see if I can fix it up before I put it on the org.
Also, That eye-removal surgery was totally necessary
(Actually, I should've gotten rid of it)