New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

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New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:04 am

anyone want to beta test my new video?
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:15 am

Video: Dokuro - ska
Editer: ReXMaster
Anime: Dokuro - chan
Theme: happy go lucky and some killing XD
Music: Detective School Q - Luvly,Merry-Go-Round


Download link for beta
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JPFET1P2
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby kireblue » Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:03 am

This AMV is pretty good. I do feel that it started pretty abruptly though. I think that you should add add 2-3 seconds of video before the point where the song starts.

I feel that the cross fades at (0:38 - 0:55) should be replaced with a bunch of different transitions. Too much action is taking place for you to use cross-fades in those scenes.

(0:57 - 1:05): I can see that you were going for a particular "timing", but the third triangle always seems out of place. The first 2 triangles and the three lines appear on the screen at the perfect time, but the third triangle always seen to came too soon. Instead of having it come on the screen at 0:59 and 1:04, I feel that it should come on the screen at around 1:00 and 1:05. Its really just a 1 second difference, but I feel that it would make the scene flow smother.

(0:12 - 0:15): From 0:12 to 0:13, it seems that you were adding a "scene block" for each of the 4 beats that were in that second of the song. But from (0:13 - 0:14), you stopped. I think that you should have continued to add "scene blocks" until the point where you added the overlay of Dokuroru (0:16), So 8-10 more "scene blocks".

Overall I really liked this amv. It does a really good job at capturing the silliness of the show. :up: I hope my comments help.
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:21 pm

thx man any one else has anything to say? and btw on the start like what would u like me to do? like start it out with like them saying "well it looks like rexmaster came out with another amv, well fuck we better watch it" Here we GO!
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby kireblue » Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:43 pm

kireblue wrote:(0:12 - 0:15): From 0:12 to 0:13, it seems that you were adding a "scene block" for each of the 4 beats that were in that second of the song. But from (0:13 - 0:14), you stopped. I think that you should have continued to add "scene blocks" until the point where you added the overlay of Dokuroru (0:16), So 8-10 more "scene blocks".

I accidentally put a zero instead of a one in front of the time "segments" that I listed. I was actually talking about the scenes from (1:12 - 1:15)

ReXMaster wrote:thx man any one else has anything to say? and btw on the start like what would u like me to do? like start it out with like them saying "well it looks like rexmaster came out with another amv, well fuck we better watch it" Here we GO!

I didn't mean that you should add a title or scene with text. I was talking about adding 2-3 seconds of a scene from the anime. (For example: The first scene that you used shows Dokuru and Sakura walking somewhere. You may want to extend the scene and start it 2 seconds before the music.) Depending on what happens in the scene, this may not work though.

Also, you may not even want to change the start of the AMV. I just feel that the moment I click the play button, the AMV suddenly starts playing without any lead in. I'm a bit curious, did you edit the song to be this way? Or does it actually start like that?
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:32 pm

it starts like that man >.< i know its just like right in your face right at the began if there is more to it i would like to find it but that's the only mp3 i could find of that song
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby kireblue » Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:36 pm

I just sent you a PM with the full length version of the song. I'd recommend that you take just the "lead in" of it (the first 20 seconds), and add it to the beginning of your amv. Then add in some anime scenes for it. This will save you the trouble of having to drastically extend your amv and re-timing the entire video to the full length version.
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:40 pm

hahah well thx man i will do that XD
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby ReXMaster » Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:24 am

it wont work man mine is a remix v i got from somewhere i don't remember were i got it from tho... and its a different sound quality from your to mine i tryed it it does not sound right i guess i will just leave it as is or put something at the start of it i dont know what yet tho
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Re: New Video coming out soon who want to beta test it?

Postby kireblue » Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:33 am

gambatte :up:
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