My second and first ever amv :)

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My second and first ever amv :)

Postby Ari Iburuhimu » Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:51 pm

These are my first and second Amvs i hope you enjoy:) also some feedback would be nice;p


1st:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qb80VlskEfg

2nd: ALOT better
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5fN_k1AEqSo

Thanks:)
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Re: My second and first ever amv :)

Postby SilverFreedoms » Mon Jan 11, 2010 6:31 pm

Subtitles should NEVER be on your AMV . NEVER NEVER NEVER

Secondly you need some work on your sync. Bleach does not strike me as a big dancing anime but the second concept could work with some tweaking. Some of your effects were rather noticeable and did not do much for the amv if it did anything positive at all.

Concentrate on the second one

I noticed that you attempted to do a rapid sequence of clips near the beginning at each of the little notes but you need to go back and rework it to be more precise. (Because some of them seemed to be off). What is your subject matter ? Byaukuya ? The shirtless wonder? The fight between them ? The song strikes me as a song that would be effective in an amv about a villain or some other group that likes to kill people .
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