Opinion on beginning of this WIP

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Opinion on beginning of this WIP

Postby gotenks794 » Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:10 am

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I was having a lot of trouble staring off this video. The beginning of the song is a bit strange to me and I was just wondering if you think that the way I did it works. I'm not sure I like the way I have it, what with the large blank chunks and all, but i think that it just might work. Maybe I should rethink the clip choices though...I'm not sure. :x Any input will be greatly appreciated.
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Re: Opinion on beginning of this WIP

Postby Animated » Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:01 am

It was great, i don't think you should change anything. Keep it up.
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Re: Opinion on beginning of this WIP

Postby mirkosp » Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:32 am

The black works, not too sure about the scenes. The wiggle and noise didn't work out as wanted, imho.
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