WIP Red Heart Project

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WIP Red Heart Project

Postby Rubystars » Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:52 pm

This is my work in progress.

http://rapidshare.de/files/46528757/red ... 2.wmv.html

The anime is Spice and Wolf and the music is Red Heart by Vicki Hansen.

I think the clips at the beginning are a little long.

I was trying to go with the whole thing of her being a wheat goddess (or at least a being honored as one) with images of wheat, wolves, and nature. I picked the didge music because it seemed spiritual and nice.

I'm not sure if this is ok or not or if I should scrap it and start over.

I know my first video was crappy but I'm trying to learn how to make better ones.

I have a few questions, one is the clip length too long in the beginning, two, does the video flow well, and three, can you hear the audio ok? My speakers are bad so I can only hear the higher notes in the music when I have my headphones on.

To compare this music appears in a video (not mine) on Live Leak called Red Heart with images of Australian people in it. I don't know if it's ok to link to Live Leak or not so I'll leave the link out for now.

Also I was wondering if there's anything else people would like to say about this work in progress.
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Re: WIP Red Heart Project

Postby animedays » Sun Apr 05, 2009 5:15 pm

Since no one is biting, I'll take a stab at it. I'll PM you with my thoughts... :D In a while :)

I'd appreciate it if you'd take a stab at my beta...

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=93774
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Re: WIP Red Heart Project

Postby Rubystars » Sun Apr 05, 2009 9:17 pm

Thank you very much, and I also sent you a message! I think I'm going to use this video for practice and put it on a streaming site instead of this one because I want to practice some more before I try to put one on here again. I might put it in the database when I finish it but not upload it here unless I can make it good enough to where I feel ok uploading it here.

I'm going to fool around with it and try to fix the things you mentioned in your message to me.
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