http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VM6RF1U3
A short 23 seconds beta. There is one footageless black scene in it in the middle that I will fill later.
Potential problem areas I want you to look at
0:06 - 0:08 ~ Two scenes. Both moving across the vid.
0:08 - 0:10 ~ Two scenes. One white flash in the vid. One black flash in the vid.
I wonder if it looks ok that 0:08 - 0:10 no long have footage moving across the vid. Does it break the flow?
0:20 - 0:21 ~ It's very flashy here and I wanna know whether you can see the girl running on the roof. The girl is very small here. I'm afraid the viewers will not notice her.
Point out any other problems you like... My goal is to start it off mysterious.
thanks!!!!
