First Timer Looking to Improve

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First Timer Looking to Improve

Postby Snow Puma » Wed Jun 04, 2008 4:16 pm

Just wanted to post my first AMV and get some feedback on it. I actually posted this in the announcement forum earlier, then I realized this is probably a better place to get feedback on it.

[vidid=159361]

Now with NTSC quality download!

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_editvideo_step1.php?vid_id=159361

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Postby guy07 » Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:58 pm

Sure, I don't mind helping out first timers. I'll look it over and give a honest review in about 24 hours. I'll provide some tips and such if your really looking to improve, but don't take my criticism as an insult, I'll just be being honest. 'K? :D

Um ... i guess you can leave a opinion for this video:
[vidid=146008]
Enjoy, and expect a op in a day or so.
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Postby JaddziaDax » Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:49 pm

not a huge fan of the watermark.
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Postby Snow Puma » Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:30 pm

guy07:
Sure thing, I left you an opinion. I look forward to hear back from you.

JaddziaDax:
Just for you, I've replaced the video with a new version that has a slightly smaller and more opaque watermark. If you want to see this video without any watermark I'm afraid you'll have to go to Otakon 2008.
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Postby JaddziaDax » Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:01 pm

watermarks don't stop people from taking your footage so 90% of the time I find them pointless, I donno they are a pet peeve of mine :/
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Postby guy07 » Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:25 pm

Alrighty, your opinion is up, really good work for a first video. And thanks for the op. Feel free to send a beta my way if you start workin on a new video :D
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Postby Snow Puma » Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:32 am

Maybe in a bit, I've got some other ideas for videos in my head, but at the moment I'm doing some broadcast work and that eats up a lot of time.
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Postby Vega Sailor » Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:52 pm

Wow! Great job! I can't believe that's your first video. You obviously did your homework!

I left you an opinion, so if you would be so kind to leave me one in return I would be very happy! :D

Video: Advent Beowulf
Category: Trailer, Parody, Drama,
Anime: Final Fantasy: Advent Children, Crisis Core: Final Fantasy Seven
Song: Beowulf Trailer
Artist: Beowulf
Creator: Vega Sailor
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Postby Snow Puma » Sun Jun 22, 2008 11:11 pm

Nicely done trailer, I gave you your return OP and look forward to your future videos as well.
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Postby Angelic_Sabyne » Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:25 am

Feel free to op any (or all, if you're ambitious!) of my latest three vids. Your choice. :)

[vidid=160275]
[vidid=159236]
[vidid=159104]

And I'll DL and op yours in return.

Best of luck with your future vids. :)
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Postby Strider_Black » Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:49 am

I'll look at your vid.

[vidid=159957]
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Postby Rev. Takahashi Fan » Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:40 am

OP up
I am gonna leave you with my profile link, feel free to browse through and pick any video.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_myprofile.php?user_id=609891
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