In all honesty yaoigirl, not trying to flame or anything, but you might want to practice some more before you post your vids for OPs. Nothing to much, just read through some of the guides on the site, maybe watch some of the more famous amvs around to see some examples of the level you're trying to reach for.
Because not very many people are going to be nice about it.
Also, you need to upload it on this site, or else we won't be able to officialy rate and give you opinions.
One question, I watched and downloaded it from the site you linked, what program did you use to make it? And did the scenes have that kinda "jerky" motion before you made the amv?