I would like to exchange opinions for my vid, which I've finally finished for good (I hope). I encourage everyone to be extremely critical about the action/editing. I'd really appreciate detailed comment on which parts you didn't like and why. My next vid is going to a con, so I want to know which aspects of my editing can be improved. If desired, I'll make my review of your vid likewise. Oh, don't be equally demanding towards originallity. That was never my goal with this vid. Feel free to give a low mark for it, but you needn't waste too much time writing about it, I know
