Your opinion about my AMV

[AllegoryStark]

Hi, I do some AMV, but I want to have your opinion. Did I do well or you have suggestion for what I need to change.

Music: The Eden Project - Fumes
Anime: Kiseijuu (Parasyte)
Video: Vegas Pro
Link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=VzEi8orTcoQ

Music: Au5 ft. Danyka Nadeau- Follow You (Rootkit Remix)
Anime: Kiseijuu (Parasyte)
Video: Vegas Pro
Link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Hw1RN8SGhGc

Music: MBLAQ - This is war
Anime: One Piece
Video: Vegas pro
Link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=I7gLw-7r6t8

[8bitcritr]

I've only seen the first one so far and its not bad but your effect definitely need refining. The glass breaking effect at 0:19 felt completely out of place, and the fact that it didn't move with the train, and had a sound effect that conflicts with the beat made it worse. All the motion you added is not a bad choice but most of it loos very clumsy and unnatural, try to slow it down and smooth out their paths of motion to make it smoother and less clunky. Also it would help to check all the timings again, some of them are off beat. i didn't understand what the effect at 0:37 was for and the girls face didn't really fit into that little mask you had over her clip, it was kind of awkward.

Other than that stuff the video looks good, the quality looks great and a lot of the effects add to the mood. Its the sloppier effects that sort of downgrade the whole video, so work on that.
I'll try and watch one or two more of the videos you posted and in the meantime it'd be cool if you could do an OP for this video I did.


BTW why haven't you added these videos to the org yet? your not really suppose to post about final videos that aren't listed