Little Stories- Monogatari Series 1:1

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Little Stories- Monogatari Series 1:1

Postby Ethikx » Mon Jun 23, 2014 4:16 am

This is my first AMV, so I want to get some feedback for improvements. I have not uploaded to the site yet, as this is not the final version.
Song: Little Talks by Of Monsters and Men
Anime: Bakemonogatari, Nisemonogatari, Nekomonogatari: Kuro, Monogatari Series: Second Season

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNXMQljWZNw

I am going to update it once the bluray for Monogatari: Second Season is available. Until then, I will be practicing editing to fix current problems with the video, such as:
- a few lip-sync problems
- smoothness of transitions
- lack of digital effects
- overlays/layering

Any thoughts/tips are greatly appreciated. I want to stockpile a list of changes/fixes to start preparing for. Link me to your posts so I can help you too ^_^
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