Critique anyone?

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Critique anyone?

Postby Sephirothskr » Tue Jul 30, 2013 9:06 pm

I'm working on a serious Avatar Music Video that's taking months.?? So I took a break today and just made a quick Avatar Music Video. Tell me if you guys like it? I mean after all, only took a day xD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZ9kKyo40PY

[MOD16: Critique requests and WIP videos should go to the Opinion Exchange Forum. I've moved the thread for you.]
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Squeezeplay » Mon Aug 12, 2013 5:01 pm

I like it a lot! I'm going to check out the Avatar now. If this took you a day, I can only imagine how good your SERIOUS Avatar Music Video is.
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Sephirothskr » Tue Aug 13, 2013 6:33 pm

Haha Thank you! :) I know you'll love the show. It's just.?? great.
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Squeezeplay » Tue Aug 13, 2013 6:40 pm

Dude, you have no idea. I'm on the 7th or so ep of the Avatar and the 13th issue of the manga. I have a new member of my top 10 or 20 shounen series. ^_^

While it's not as deep as some (Naruto, One Piece) the action is phenomenal and the characters are compelling. Ya gotta love that opening title sequence too!
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Sephirothskr » Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:29 pm

Haha yeah :) I don't read the manga.? I love the Avatar too much.
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Squeezeplay » Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:55 pm

The manga is actually pretty awesome. The Avatar isn't really that different. They added some stuff to the Avatar to flesh out the characters and they took out a bunch of the gore (which only serves to make the manga cooler by comparison because you get the full impact of how horrific their situation is)? But most of what's added in the Avatar isn't really added to the main char., but rather the supporting char. storylines. They changed the dialogue for the Avatar a little bit here and there (hard to tell because of different translators but you can sort of see the meaning in each translation pointing to differing dialogue in the 2 different raw media)?

I'd say at this point, I don't see either one being better or worse than the other, just slightly different in small details. Dunno if that'll change, as I'm only on ep 10 of the Avatar and still issue 14 of the manga. The fact that each manga issue is around 35-45 pages makes it slower going than say, Naruto or One Piece, which I also read.
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Sephirothskr » Thu Aug 15, 2013 6:14 am

Yeah.? I just can't read it. My reading is dedicated to soul eater and Naruto.
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Re: Critique anyone?

Postby Squeezeplay » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:46 pm

Sephirothskr wrote:Yeah.? I just can't read it. My reading is dedicated to soul eater and Naruto.


I understand a lack of time. However, here is a perfect example of why the manga can be better than the Avatar:

http://www.mangahere.com/manga/shingeki ??? 017/3.html

If you read the next few pages and then watch the scene in the Avatar, you'll notice that they really sort of gloss over anything meaningful that came from Eren's question.
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