MY SECOND AMV/ 5 centimeters per second - Illuminated

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MY SECOND AMV/ 5 centimeters per second - Illuminated

Postby zoronik » Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:57 pm

Please share me your thoughts and suggestions on this amv !

Thank you !


[vidlink]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iIoUChxwtJM[/vidlink]
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Re: MY SECOND AMV/ 5 centimeters per second - Illuminated

Postby DazedTheory » Fri Jul 26, 2013 2:00 pm

I enjoyed it however I thought that the cutting kind of broke the flow at times. It was great when the music picked up but when it slowed the cuts made it feel choppy. I really liked the scenes you used they set a great mood and conplimented the music. The other thing that bothered me was the lack of any real story. It just kind of felt like a retelling of the movie that wasn't complete. It wasn't that big of a deal this time but it could have been improved. Those are my only complaints I wish you success as an AMV editor. :D

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