Hi everyone, I'm new on this forum and finally write this topic 'cause I need some opinions about my newest (second) Avatar Music Video. It's nothing wery special, but I really want to know what are a good and maybe brad points in it

I will be wery grateful if someone who knows something about creating good Avatar Music Video's will leave me an opinion - it can be very helpful for me 'cause now I do my third video and I don't want to make the same mistakes

Thanks.
And of course I'll give my opinion in return

but I don't think that I can teach anyone how to edit

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http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members/members_videoinfo.php?v=190076