Just wondering if I could get some opinions on the video beta bellow. Any opinions are welcome as long as they are 100% truthful and honest.

Video quality is not much of a factor, but I don't want it to be good enough to where you can notice what little FX i did at which points.
Thank you for your time and I hope you enjoy what little video I have. (Sorry if a YouTube link is not effective. Upon request I will upload to Sendspace for a better viewing experience.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzfBEFdarVU