Yes, i know it's not 720p, i'm working on a HD one tho.
Give me a feed back please, first time working with ''epic music''.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qplmy6iDL2M
TheLuminaireShow wrote:I can tell you had a clear goal in mind, but there are some issues in the execution. I'm not sure how I feel about having quotes from the show in the video because that makes it feel more like a movie trailer. Regardless, the music was much too loud to hear what they were even saying. I'm going to guess you letter boxed your video for the purpose of the subtitles right? I think I would prefer a full screen video and no subtitles. Also, you didn't subtitle all the audible dialogue either. And as you mentioned, the source quality is lacking.
I think the jumps to black are appropriate for the parts of the song that fade, but I think the darkness should fade with it. For much of the fight, the transitions to black are more abrupt and don't fade with the music, which I think would have helped a lot.
I would have to give the video a 5/10. I can see where you're trying to go but there are many decisions made that don't do your vision justice. I think there are areas of mass improvement you can make. If you put the time in, you could possibly make this really great if you wanted.
I think the jumps to black are appropriate for the parts of the song that fade, but I think the darkness should fade with it. For much of the fight, the transitions to black are more abrupt and don't fade with the music, which I think would have helped a lot.
TheLuminaireShow wrote:Around 1:30 and onward, you dip to black at certain parts of the music. If you notice, it's a very abrupt transition. I was trying to say you should lengthen the transition so that it appears to fade to black, as oppose to just, BLACK all of a sudden, see what I'm saying?
FXD960 wrote:I see, problem is that that part of the clip was too short by itself, that's why.![]()
Kevmaster wrote:FXD960 wrote:I see, problem is that that part of the clip was too short by itself, that's why.![]()
Try time shift
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