I liked the concept in the beginning combining the maromi ufocatch with Taeko / the picture with the necklace...i guess i dont know how to describe it, like, cutting the plots down to their main core.
now this is something only I probably do, but when I see an amv with multiple main characters I mentally squish them all into one "the protagonist" which works pretty well for your video, but a little ways into it, it feels like you change the story to something else. Take it for good or bad, but there was a lot of fitting lyric sync
The song also felt like it should have had a lot more fades instead of hard cuts
"Uhmmm... You know... it was at that point that I realized that maybe Thierry wasn't actually a film maker, and he was maybe just someone with mental problems who happened to have a camera. " -Banksy