Paranoia agent AMV

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Paranoia agent AMV

Postby wertwow » Tue May 08, 2012 2:39 pm

Just looking for some opinions on my most recent AMV. I know my editing isn't great at the minute but looking for tips on how to improve.



or youtube link (blocked in the US) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ULq5p_UYd4
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Re: Paranoia agent AMV

Postby zibbazabba905 » Thu May 10, 2012 9:15 pm

I liked the concept in the beginning combining the maromi ufocatch with Taeko / the picture with the necklace...i guess i dont know how to describe it, like, cutting the plots down to their main core.

now this is something only I probably do, but when I see an amv with multiple main characters I mentally squish them all into one "the protagonist" which works pretty well for your video, but a little ways into it, it feels like you change the story to something else. Take it for good or bad, but there was a lot of fitting lyric sync

The song also felt like it should have had a lot more fades instead of hard cuts
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