Props for Blue Stahli!
I don't know the source footage too well, but for both vids it seemed to me like you'd just put a song over a TV episode - I'd like to have it more obvious that you're changing scenes to match the video.
Also, this forum is opinion exchange - in order to leave opinion, it's meant to have an entry in the org database on the main site animemusicvideos.org I searched your username and no vids, so please consult this guide for how to do that. You can just have an entry but not upload the vid. http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/
Because an opinion is like a star rating - it's not just a reply on this forum. If you weren't going to offer opinions back to people, then a better forum would have been the announcements forum, and you can also check out what others are posting - you might see something you like.
Keep editing, keep having fun, and keep your eyes open for tips - we're all meant to keep looking for ways to improve!