You need to work in the coloring of the first seconds, in the way it currently looks in the beta, looks weird, although I can get the intention to color it to match the scene at 0:31
I feel the music does justice to the anime, and I like the fact about the man talking at the beginning. In the middle, I guess at 2:56 I don't get why the man is talking and also an additional audio (DVD audio?) is also there, since at that point of the amv the video just need to go.
In general was a good beta, looks very interesting