My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

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My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby TheLuminaireShow » Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:50 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=185295

Video:Frenetic
Category: Action, Drama, Comedy, Dance
Anime: Angel Beats
Song: Pressure (Alesso Remix)
Artist: Nadia

Hey guys! this is my very first AMV. I've been finding awesome videos here for years and I finally made one and would love some critical feedback! I put a lot of hard work into it. I haven't posted around here before, but it seems like the etiquette is to critique other people's work as well, so I would certainly love to voice my opinion on your work if you have it.

Thanks for your time.

[Kariudo: Clarified the thread title a bit for Op Ex]
Last edited by TheLuminaireShow on Fri Dec 30, 2011 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby BrighTIde » Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:38 am

Video: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=184876
Category: Action
Anime: Deep Dive
Song: Eyes on fire (Zed Dead Remix)
Artist: Blue Foundation
Creator: BrighTide

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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby Yserien » Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:53 am

VIDEO: PRESSURE
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=185295

Opening: Nice and strong, very good use of silence and tying into her putting on the headphones.

Synching: Very good synching, the anime is very good quality too. Very enjoyable to see similiar quality of anime being used through out.

Effects: I am not partial all which was used, especially after 1:21 to like 1:30, the few after sorta fit was nice.

Quality: As much as I love retro anime, it's jarring to see AMVs that use like Sailor Moon with something like Angel Beats. The style and quality do not match and hinder the flow. This flowed very well.

Ending: Simple and strong, like the intro!

Music: Very nice choice, great job!



VIDEO: Eyes on Fire - Deep Dive AMV

I'll be brief here. I do not mean to offend, but encourage. You added effects to someone's else's work and put it to music. Personally, should be using more then one scene and properly crediting the music on youtube.

Don't be afraid of failure, experiment.
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby BrighTIde » Fri Dec 30, 2011 6:16 am

"VIDEO: Eyes on Fire - Deep Dive AMV

I'll be brief here. I do not mean to offend, but encourage. You added effects to someone's else's work and put it to music. Personally, should be using more then one scene and properly crediting the music on youtube.

Don't be afraid of failure, experiment."

I do love constuctive critisism for the record, I don't get upsett or offended if people don't like things i make, so don't worry about that =), just making it clear that i'm not "defending" my work, just explaining. The video drew bits from both deep dive and another side another story, and the entire thing was cut and fitted bit by bit to the music, i didn't just grab an entire scene and wack music in there. Please explain how I can properly credit the music, and not just that i didn't do it.

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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby okamsrazor » Fri Dec 30, 2011 10:48 am

Left you an opinion, hopefully you find it helpful. I would like a review on either of the two following please. Thanks!

Video: Stalker
Category: Comedic Romance
Anime: Mirai Nikki (TV)
Song: Stalker
Artist: Goldfinger
Creator: Okamsrazor

Video: Epic Rap Battle Of History
Category: Parody/Comedy
Anime: Naruto Shippuuden (TV), Bleach (TV)
Song: Epic Rap Battle of History 13 Soundtrack
Creator: Okamsrazor
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby TheLuminaireShow » Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:03 pm

Alright, I have returned the favor and rated those that rated mine. :) Thanks very much and I would certainly appreciate a few more!
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby CodeZTM » Fri Dec 30, 2011 2:18 pm

Left your OP. :)

The one I'd like to have reviwed is this one:

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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby TheLuminaireShow » Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:13 pm

Much obliged. I have returned the favor. :)
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby advent87 » Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:47 am



Expect to here from me this afternoon.

Looking forward to seeing your video. I was pretty excited when I posted my first video on the site too.

I am also interested in what you think of this video too.

Thanks in advance!!
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Re: My First AMV [1:1 exchange]

Postby advent87 » Thu Jan 26, 2012 3:33 pm

Sorry for the delay but the opinion is up. Great first video. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next>

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