0:08 I feel the mecha should land sooner
0:09/0:10 not sure what but the motion seems wrong in the video, i don't know if its slowed down or a frame rate issue...
0:14 too long on a still frame
0:41 the action seems too remote
0:42 not a fan of the "shaky-cam" here,
0:55 I might rethink the collection of scenes after the eyes for better lyric sync (my inclination would be to continue with eyes, or go to something high-impact nightmarish like the weird shot of her in 1:04)
1:07 I don't know what I'm seeing... looks like giant book-shelves, they don't make sense until after one sees the girl with them in the background, so if you want to keep them, consider shuffling the order of those clips.
1:13 serious pixilation
1:27- 1:29 there's something about the strobe/ intersplicing here that doesn't seem quite right, but I can't put my finger on it.
1:39 frame blending
1:52 this explosion is so much less coloful than the shots preceding it
2:07 there is something jerky in the pan...
2:18 lip flap
2:28 I don't like the dip to black here, or i don't like the video returning for a single click.
There is macroblocking throughout, but i'm going to guess that is because you wanted to keep the file size down on this beta.
I like the video on the whole, it has a good flow, is well paced with the music, and has some beautiful synching....