Revolutionary Girl Utena AMV

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Revolutionary Girl Utena AMV

Postby oceangirl88 » Mon May 23, 2011 5:35 pm

Hello, I spent quite some time on this AMV and was wondering if someone might watch it, any feedback would be greatly greatly appreciated! <3

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NQMy-AH8NpU

Mediafire: http://www.mediafire.com/?je0h7fyyhijjz97
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Re: Revolutionary Girl Utena AMV

Postby lloyd9988 » Tue May 31, 2011 11:42 pm

It was an interesting AMV, the song choice was a good choice and the anime was pretty good. Now, time for the criticism part. Scene choice was a bit off, like the bells' scene seemed a bit unnecessary and didn't provide any emotion. I wasn't sure if there was a real concept involved when you were trying to make this AMV and kinda lacked some transitions and timing.

I know it sounds a bit harsh, but add some effects, listen to the timing and the beat, and find an idea you want to portray and present it as clear as you possibly can. Now, ENOUGH OF THE HARSH CRITICISM!! XD

I did like the beginning scene where the background had a bit of fade in/ fade out transition which was kinda going with the song, but I'm pretty sure that was founded by accident but it still worked out in the end, so that was a good scene choice. XD The fight scenes worked out pretty well, and so did the dance scenes. Keep at it, and get a concept going :up:
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Re: Revolutionary Girl Utena AMV

Postby RajinIII » Thu Jun 09, 2011 10:11 pm

I just left an opinion for you! Here is mine for your viewing pleasure.

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