2:1 WIP Naruto beta. opinion exchange

[Lithion]

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=41NYYVN4

tell me what you think, im going for more of a storyline approach i think i need more effects but im not sure where i need them and what to change. post your feedback here and your 2 vids you want critiqued and ill get to them when i can. ive been working 15 hour work days so i can only do soo much. ill give an opinion about how big you give mine so if you give a 2 page super awesome and helpfull judgement ill try and do the same, but if you give me a "pretty good i liked the song' then ill give you 1 sentence in return haha.