[WIP] Safetysuit + 5cm

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[WIP] Safetysuit + 5cm

Postby Pseven21 » Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:09 pm

The beta is only about 50 seconds long, but I think it shows the gist of what the product will look like.

Anime: 5 centimeters per second
Software: Adobe Premiere CS5
Music: Find A Way - Safetysuit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vu9XRxBmxCw

This is the first video I've made in about 2 years, so I'm VERY VERY RUSTY.

The youtube account I uploaded on is not my actual account, just in case your wondering.
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Re: [WIP] Safetysuit + 5cm

Postby AimoAio » Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:48 pm

Hmm...that was not bad :D ( :up: for using a Safetysuit song - just cause I love them <3) but it didn't really stick in my mind or anything although that might have been because its 5cm and I've seen too many 5cm videos already xD

Only thing I would suggest is that you time the petal falling at the beginning of the video to the twang in the music :D

And also the beginning seems a little slow(0:00-0:01) like there was supposed to be a scene there but got missed out.
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Re: [WIP] Safetysuit + 5cm

Postby Pseven21 » Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:28 pm

AimoAio wrote:Hmm...that was not bad :D ( :up: for using a Safetysuit song - just cause I love them <3) but it didn't really stick in my mind or anything although that might have been because its 5cm and I've seen too many 5cm videos already xD

Only thing I would suggest is that you time the petal falling at the beginning of the video to the twang in the music :D

And also the beginning seems a little slow(0:00-0:01) like there was supposed to be a scene there but got missed out.


Well the music didn't even start at 0:00 - 0:01 lol.

Ok, I finished the chorus, but I'm having doubts: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZL0PYB15goY
Is the scene selection for the chorus alright? I'm not loving it that much.
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Re: [WIP] Safetysuit + 5cm

Postby AimoAio » Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:33 pm

What I meant was the beginning seemed off timed, like the scene appears maybe a few milliseconds late.

Scene selection for the chorus looks okay to me. The overlay at 0:52 seems out of place though, mainly because it was the only overlay in that section :\
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