Saw this and Masters and I really dug it! The beginning had a couple parts that, with a little tweaking, could have been perfect but overall still a great video! Nothing major to complain about at all. Probably my favorite from you to date. I almost wish you didn't send it to Masters but Pro instead, that way you would've had a better chance at winning and getting some recognition.
Also, you should just include a download link right off the bat
Asking in private is laaaaaaaaaaaaame. lol