This is looking really great, Deuce! It's got some excellent placement now, the beginning is exceptionally strong! My only issue now is that I think the ending, where we should have a bit of a finale with a lot of stronger clips, is a little slow with Jackass through time and Hallmark. You posted that Jackass got uproarious laughter, right? If that's true, then that one may be fine. Anyway, I'll do my breakdown.
White meat: First off, did everyone/anyone like the "I am the other white meat!" clip? I did that quickly as an experiment, it's not too funny, but if it gets a chuckle, that's all I really went for. Does everyone think it's worth keeping? Also, if we do, Deuce, can you cut it right when the audio cuts? I left a little buffer which I probably shouldn't have, the silence is kinda strange there.
New Test Pattern: I've been watching this twice now for notes, and while the first time I thought the test pattern sound was an interesting one, I realized it started to annoy me. The white noise-ish type from the original version clears the head I've found, this one struck me as more and more annoying the more I heard it. Is there any particular reason you changed it? It's not horrible, but over time it just started getting to me.
Bomberman: Love the new placement, it feels much stronger here!
Geico: I think you may have forgotten to move the Princess Tutu geico one to the front. This time especially I felt that its introduction was a bit too abrupt. I think switching the Tutu one with the first Haruhi one will take care of it just fine. By that point, everyone knows the gag.
Jojo and neighbors: I agree with Moonbunnychan, the laughter may overlap. But I must say, I LOVE where you started the Jojo clip. It felt so much more conversational without the silent moment rather than introspective like it seemed before. Nice cut! It actually made it funnier I think. I have a suggestion for moving clips that may add a tiny theme and give laughter leeway. Put Jojo after Kyoka bunch, because at that point people have sat through the end of the theme waiting for the next joke, and I kinda always wanted to drive a car through the Brady Bunch home ^^ The other move is to take Neighbors from that spot and move it after Jamaica, and you get a bit of an ocean theme between them. Both Kyoka and Jamaica have sort of slower endings, so they leave everyone ready. Anyone else have thoughts?
Slap Chop back? That older slap chop clip was back but not in the credits. I'll be honest, I didn't miss it in the last beta, I'm for cutting it.
Okay, now I'm begging: I'll once again beg to remove the monitor from the Naruto clip at least ^^ Even if the annoying 'deleted' is a battle I'll lose, I refuse to admit the monitor was a good idea ^^ I'm totally serious, just remove the monitor and it'll just get stronger. There's no way removing the monitor will harm it.
Jump in Coffee Toffee Twisted Frosty Deuce is there a way you could cut Coffee Toffee into two and just... remove that little audio skip from the center of it please? It really harms it for me, because it's this small moment of obvious silence, and the clip is so good, I don't want it harmed. Can you work with it a bit?
Hallmark: Sooo much clearer, shorter, straight to the point. Definitely an improvement I think. Nicely done. I don't think the eyes missing harms it at all, and leaving the teary eyes actually makes it better because it throws a curveball to the audience ^^ I must say though, I really want it earlier myself. Near the end the slower stuff with less direct comedy loses interest a bit faster, so I'd suggest considering moving it between the Ace of Cakes and Death Note/Family Guy.
Credits: Sorry Deuce, but unfortunately the way the credits are laid out doesn't work

I know you were trying to avoid them expanding into the right side of the screen, but you shouldn't worry about that. These credits gave me serious trouble in knowing where to look. I know you did them quickly to get them in there, but they definitely need work. First off, don't be afraid to put them in list format, because that's so much more comfortable for western eyes. And if they overlap videos a little bit, don't worry, because consistency is key. We can even shorten some of them if you want. In the next few days, please work on these and post another version so we get another look.
Credit Videos: Hmm... there are parts of the pedobear and haruhi setup I like. Pedobear works, but may be stronger back in the 'finale' section to keep the speed up, don't you think? In that case I'm okay either way, since it does break up the credits a bit. I didn't want the Haruhi credits vid to be with the credits going though, because it was too small, and had too little movement compared to this moving wall of text. The eye will ALWAYS naturally be drawn to the largest moving object, that's a big animation rule, so the haruhi clip works strongest when it cuts into the credits like it's hacking the feed. Plus people want to see sources and such, so their attention will be darting back and forth, and the smallness of the side screen is a troublesome for subtle movements. I know you might be worried that it adds some time to the credits, but credits are credits. The haruhi vid can be used to sort of 'reboot' their attention if you play about 15 seconds of credits, then the video. People will then start expecting stuff and pay closer attention. The audience will not ditch the credits if they see that stuff happens with it.
Transitions:-I'd suggest putting the AMVS4 logo right up against the Sony POS clip. The 4 seconds of the low tone will allow for laughter time or whatever.
-For the Beck/Dethklok one, please test pattern it as soon as "awaken" is done and the screen is completely red so it's like the Fumoffu beam destroyed the camera ^^
-Ending: Agreed with moonbunnychan on the ending. I liked it better with the test pattern. But yeah, I used some buffer space with that render too, so feel free to cut it after a half-beat after "Moon him" and go test pattern. That should make it land stronger.
For the credits, when I mean list format I mean:
TITLE
Creator
Source
Audio
If you really wanted to save some space, you could try out:
TITLE (Creator)
Source
Audio
moonbunnychan wrote:That Beck/Deathklock one is brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
Thanks so much, moonbunnychan

I'm so happy I managed another one this year. Something told me if I didn't use Dethklok this year, next year the joke would be weaker.