Allow me to give a more in depth review here over each track. I hope this helps everyone..
00:00-1:05: I have no clue what's going on here.. What is this trying to parody? I think that perhaps if you were to cut this entire segment and starting with the law and order thing would make it a TON better.
1:06-1:28: Excellent work here! =D
1:29-1:51: Why is this match.com? Wouldn't it be better just to make it a funny family guy clip and call it a day? I see no connection between family guy and match.com or the anime.
(Shouldn't there be the rainbow thing between these?)
1:51 - 2:30 - Can we get some prettier fonts on this? Would make it more appealing. Also, the red behind the kung fu panda is really distracting. Can we photoshop or paint.net that out and just have the letters?
2:31 - 2:41 - I'm sure this is an inside joke, but I don't get it.... I know it's trying to parody adult swim, but I have no clue where the pic is from.
2:42 - 3:15 - I think this could be cut in half and have more impact. ABout from the middle to the end...
3:16 - 3:29 - Hilarous, don't change a thing! =D
3:30 - 3:45 - Wasn't really all that funny... But then again, I've never seen the anime.... O-o
3:46 - 4:13 - I'm not sure how it goes from Katamari commercia to pucca to full metal alchemist... There's no tying between then other than just "destroying everything". Best bet would be to either stick with the katamari joke or cut it and pucca and stick with full metal alchemist.
4:14 - 4:43 - Eh. It was cute.. Would have gone for better scenes here and there, but eh..
4:44 - 4:50 - Cute, but there needs to be a clear indicator that you were going to commercial break... O_o
4:51 - 5:28 - Cute, but the premier pro box looked bad.. I'd paint.net or photoshop just the logo. The box looks really tacky...
5:29 - 5:39 - LOVE IT! =D
5:40 - 5:57 - Excellent work on this one. =D
5:58 - 6:13 - WONDERFUL!
6:14-6:19 : EXCELLENT
6:20 - 6:29 - I don't get it... At all. O-o
6:30 - 6:55 for the love of all that is salad, please cut it....
6:56 - 7:11 : excellent work on transferring to commericals.
7:12 - 8:45 I love it. =D
8:46 - : 9:05 Excellent work,
9:06 - : Not funny in all honesty... O-o
9:13 - LOVED IT! =D
9:19 - Eh... It's ok.
9:27 - I don't get it... O-o Definitly too long for sure...
9:55 : Wrong anime choice...
10:04 - Cute, needs more black between it and the commerical logo.
10:08 : good work on the commerical, perhaps some guitar hero footage from gameplay
10:46 : Again, BEAUTIFUL
10:55 - Very cute.

11: 26: Again, excellent, but perhaps put this one elsewhere since you just had a Big O secne
11:42 - Very nice, just like a real adult swim commercial
12:00 - EXCELLENT!
12:25: I dont get... I'm sure those that have seen the anime get it, but I see Haurhi with this one.
12:45: BEAUTIFUL! STICK WITH IT!
13:13 - Cute.
13:18L: LOVE IT!
13:28 - BeSt track in show
13:37: Jsut don't quite like it.
13:40 - Cute, but it's been done....
14:09: Excellent work
14:43: Off sync for sure... O-o
15:15: Excellent work on this! =D
15:47: I love it. =D
16:10 : BEAUTIFUL!
16:21 Cute. But I don't get the first part of it. O_o With the flipping off.
17:10 - Excellent way to end the show
-good grief those credits are LONG. get me a word document or notepad with all the info, the video clips used during them as well as the law and order theme and I'll do them for you and attempt to get them down on time... That is if there's enough time to do it.
Also, I'm definitly going to have to get involved in AMV Salad 4, that's for sure. =D
Hope all that helps. =D