Danielle, the first half of that segment really doesn't fit in with the rest of the MEP, it just didn't show any mechs even though it was for short story development, but the last 30secs was good stuff, it included the characters in the context of the mechas being present. Can you see what I'm after now?

But yeah good job on the last 30secs of it, looks great.
and Nerd, not sure if I mentioned it, but your beta was quite good too,
even though those mechs remind me of power rangers more than anything... oh well i'll overlook it since its portrays an earlier kind of mecha design so adds variety to the project
And awesome to hear that you're making another segment fizziks =D