Otaku,
here's* my track.
Aside from the first two effects in the very beginning(The blur and the.. WHatever else that B&W effect is) everything is just cuts and fades, nothign special.
You have the right idea, but LP:RP is a fast-paced project. You need to not synch to the vocals so much as the beats. You are synching to some beats, but not all. I think your track would look better if you got it in your mind that you need to
oversynch, instead of just.. Regular synching. If that made any sense.
I know it all sounds like we're flaming you and such, but everyone just doesn't want the project to have a weak track.
Don't worry about being shot down, I got shot down on my first try too. It was a huge blow. They said "This is not good enough quality. You have to do it completely over". And I had ripped the DVDs.
I just dropped the track, went to the next one and used a different anime instead of trying to cater.
*~4 mb WMV on putfile.com. EMbedded into the site's interface, so it plays automatically. I had other sites that you could direct link to, but I forgot what they were, and I didn't bookmark them or anything, so I'm kind of screwed at the moment. So I'll just use putfile for now.