Pen, what troubles me most about my track is that, after the first minute or so things start to feel a little jumbled. First section is nicely edited and the story is easy to follow. From then on things start to feel broken. Some sections can be pieced into the story, but others feel completely seperated from the rest of the vid. Take 1.12-1.16 for example. Far as sync goes its realy damn well edited (if I do say so myself

). However it just doesnt fit in anywhere with the rest of the vid. It's good, but its not. So tweaking this scene (weather that means fixing up or replacing it alltogeather) isnt going to be easy.
Ok I think things would be easier if I explained a bit of the story of Argentosoma. Warning, I'l be spoiling the first 4 epps. Guy (Takuto Kaneshiro) is taken to a secret lab to be involved in a rather secretive experiment. Their he finds his girlfreind (Maki) also taking part. During the experiment (to revive that monster, frank) things go wrong and everyone dies except Takuto. Takuto blames the death of his girlfreind on frank. Killing the thing is prety much all thats on his mind. While in hospital a misterios guy appears and gives Takuto the opportunity to assume a new identity, by joining an elite alien fighting squad (who capture frank) and geting access to a nice mech. I'm not gona say anything about that misterios girl, except that she has a conection with frank and reminds Takuto of Maki (that explains 0:54 - 0:56).
About scene changes. Its hard to keep with a single scene and edit it properly to match the fast paced music. What troubles me more though is what scenes to actualy use. Takuto's vengance is just one section of the oeverall story of argentosoma, and it ends rather loosely. That's why closer to the end I used a few dream like scenes and tried to expand Takuto's feelings. I'l take on your advice and try to break it down into more solid sections.
Is the footage at 1:30 speed up? It looks odd. And what the hell is that yellow thing?
Yeah that fight scene is speed up. The yellow thing is an electro manetic fluffy weapon thing, which Takuto is using to attempt to kill frank. What do you think about having takuto's face in the background throughout that fight scene? I put it their as a constant reminder of just how angery Takuto is feeling.
Jasper thanks for all the previos advice. I'l look back at it and comment later. Dont know how much time I'l be able to spend on aim this week, its the final week for the semester, and thank god for that. But I'l stick around for a chat if I see ya.
One last thing. If everyone could do me a huge favour and get a beta up by friday it would be great. I'l be spending the day at a cable blessed freinds place, and I'l be leeching acordingly
