A Magical Girl MEP: Glowing Enchantments (COMPLETED)

[moezy-chan]

My apologies for taking so long to finish my beta. Right after I joined this my friends suggested *coughforcedcough* I join the Disney MEP XD Got my beta all done. Couple changes I'll probably make but I wanted to know what everyone else had to critique before I made those changes.

[hamstar138]

It's fine moezy. I completely understand, I haven't been able to work my part very much as well because I joined the Disney MEP very late as well. So no need to be sorry.

Also Moesy, I think your part looks great but the flash transition at 0:06 and at 0:19/0:20 feel a little out of place a nice smooth transition to the next one would be fine.

[moezy-chan]

It's fine moezy. I completely understand, I haven't been able to work my part very much as well because I joined the Disney MEP very late as well. So no need to be sorry.

Also Moesy, I think your part looks great but the flash transition at 0:06 and at 0:19/0:20 feel a little out of place a nice smooth transition to the next one would be fine.

Yesh, those were exactly what I wanted to change XD I'll go get that fixed~

[hamstar138]

As the time flows I'm curious to see everyone's beta. ;D

[SilverFreedoms]

For the moment, I'm going to ignore the logo, and make the beta.

It's a beta after all, it's allowed to have mistakes =(

(It seems a good portion of my footage is logoless and perfect...... 'quietly switches over to good scenes'

[hamstar138]

As long as the logo is gone for the final version then it is fine in the beta. ^_^

[SilverFreedoms]

I think I am having one of those times when I just have too much inspiration

[hamstar138]

@ Silver: I've had those days too...

@Moezy: I have don't really see anything else I find wrong with it at this moment. I think your fine to summit your final. Just summit it in the required settings.

[AimoAio]

Kaze:
I really like it. My only minor complaint is that the first scene feels a bit long so maybe you could make the fade earlier or use a light glow to sync to "begins" before "with" starts on the next scene.

Moezy:
The scene at 0:12 feels a bit long, is there another scene of the same segment but at a different angle? If not you could maybe overlay a scene of Duck or Fakir or something on the edge of the screen and add a light zoom out to the glowing duck. Also the second glowing duck scene seems kinda redundant because your first one pretty much nailed the mood for it, so I would also suggest replacing with one of Duck actually transforming or beginning to transform, like a facial shot with her glowing maybe? (I don't know where because I haven't seen the show. >__> Yet. XD) Also a light zoom out on the scene at 0:17.

I really love the duck --> girl --> princess scene change part afterwards though, that fits perfectly with what I visualize with this song though maybe a scene of the duck looking down might fit slightly more since the facial angles should be moving from down to up and not from up to down and back up.

Um...as for my part. I think I'm still missing a few scenes from a few episodes but I already know what I'm doing with it. I just need to finish up a few MEPs I owe people before I can start. But it shouldn't take long.

[hamstar138]

Um...as for my part. I think I'm still missing a few scenes from a few episodes but I already know what I'm doing with it. I just need to finish up a few MEPs I owe people before I can start. But it shouldn't take long.

hm that makes sense. I was just worried about you since I haven't heard from you in weeks.

But don't forget your finals are due by the end of the month. I wanna try to have it done by the summer.