Le me has input
0:27: Instead of a cross-fade or maybe with a crossfade, you can add a brightness & contrast effect plus a Gaussian blur effect to transition smoother.
0:32: If there's like a close up face scene, you can try a zoom in on his face with a radial blur and the end of the thingy with the transparent scenes. :3 Also, when it hits the beat at the end, try and keyframe the opacity so its like fading out but not all the way :3 probably might do the same with the other scenes as well if it looks good the first time around :3
I could probably say more but I think it looks good overall :3