It's really nice so far.
The scene at 0:04 seems to come in a little late though because the pinky promise scene was synced to "heart" but when she sings "but the very" it's still that same scene. I'm also not too fond of the scene at 0:07 where she's kinda charging towards him. I think 0:15 at the end of "special" will look nice with a black fade out before black fading into the next scene. I think the zoom at 0:20 into her face doesn't need the radial blur. 0:22 also comes in a little late if you're doing lyric sync with "this year". Try having the first doll scene fade into the second doll scene at "this". Also I'm not too sure about the one with the bag/zoom at 0:26, just don't really like it. XD And this lastly:
CodeZTM wrote::16-:18 lot of scene movement
Should maybe remove/shorten those crossfades so the movement isn't hugely noticeable.Tritio:
CodeZTM wrote:1) Watermark at :13. Speaking of which, I feel like something else might fit better here. It's a cute mask/transitions, but I just feel like something else could go there that's more in line with the story that you were telling.
I don't think the mask fits very well either. Your flash at 0:06 was kinda sharp, you should make it longer and smoother so it flows better into the next scene. The memory/flashback sequence was nice but it felt a little still, so you could try adding some light camera movements to them? Same for the ones at 0:13-end.
This is what I'll still suggest. However if you don't want to change anything it's fine. I will definitely RECOMMEND checking the mask at 0:14ish when she looks up though because I'm seeing some glitchyness. And also the feathering of the masks around 0:15/0:16 with the boy.(Just the first two, the third one at 0:17 is fine.)
Also the mask transition mentioned at 0:13....rather than slide it out, have you considered just leaving it to fade into the next scene instead? I mean it already has a zoom in, so letting it fade gently(maybe with some light blur) into the shop scene will look better than a random slide out.