0:04 - I think your black fade/scene change here is a bit offtimed. Like it's a little late?
0:12 - The slides are on time...but they feel kinda awkward. I'm not sure if it's because the blur is quite strong or because the direction of the slide and the direction of movement in the scene itself doesn't blend well together.
0:14 - The three consecutive scenes here with the temple sky and the book then the burning is kinda quick, making the pacing a little weird and screwing up the flow.
0:19ish - I think you were synching to the lyrics? If so, you missed the one between "my" and "heart".
For the next part (0:21-0:25) it feels very off because it seems to be a mix of lyric sync and beat sync at the same time. Like sometimes the beats are perfect but then there's one or two scenes that are too quick and not timed to the beat..? Kinda messes with the flow a little.
0:28 - Should probably remove the lipflap. Or make it lipsync. I would have kinda preferred it if it was a crying scene though. XD For the lyric sync.
Thanks for the input Aimo! Waiting on other feedback but I do have other ideas I want to throw at it.AimoAio wrote:Hitori:Spoiler :
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