SatoshiSakura:
I don't really like the beta, some scene choices are weird and I'm just not feeling anything from it. I do get what you're trying to show and the lyrics do fit Nezumi to some extent but I think you can do better in terms of scene selection especially since 0:19 is perfect. You could keep what you have from 0:00-0:02, until the scene where his leg comes in and replace it with the one at 0:05/0:06 of his face. Then I'd advise using scenes from another section because it starts to get draggy and long. If you could maintain the same sort of style throughout, I think it'll look good.












