Not that it's a bad thing, it just...well...yeah. The transitioning from a 2 minute track to something short to two more consecutive longer tracks just makes me keep thinking, '...Why was she there again? D:' Perhaps it will look different with a longer beta, but it's all up to you how you want it.
AngelDragoon wrote:Quick critiques if anybody want 'em!
Yay for the fixed up lip-sync! XD While it's a pretty strong piece still, there's two things that caught my eye technically. One was the font; it seemed like it was a little lower than centered and while it's not that big of a deal I figured I'd mention something. Also, in the transition of 1:25-1:26, it seems like a clip from another scene got caught in there for a split second. But perhaps it's the dissolve playing tricks on me.
Thank you! And really? The font looked pretty centered to me, but I'll have another look at it and fix it. Yeah, you're right about the transition part there, I was too lazy to fix it because I noticed it after the render and figured I'd fix it later.