Valentine MEP 2012 - Phase 1

[TritioAFB]

The Boss has uploaded a beta asides with Koneko OMG!

This is a kind of collaboration between me and the girl, so let's see if there's any kind of feedback for that beta.
Next I have to bring my solo part

[TritioAFB]

Ok 2 new betas has been added.

Check the 3rd version of Sashiro's beta

[CodeZTM]

I'll check them out very shortly.

[TritioAFB]

10 days left for January. I recommend people that has signed the MEP start extending a beta, cause we'll soon reach the first 10 days of February

Remember that the only date I set was the premier day, so if there's anyone that still wants to join the MEP you can do it

Today I have to start making the crossover considering the betas that have been watched already, you're gonna like this combination

[CodeZTM]

Sashiro: Anyway, I think the opening bit needs a little more work in terms of pacing (the first 13 seconds). I'd like to see the opening fight scenes (when the first get to fighting) with a few more flashbacks to see what they're actually fighting over.

Satoshi: Watch the flip flap a little bit, and this is going to turn out beautifully. :3 I don't care for the font. To me, it takes away from the overall feeling of the track. Or if you do choose to do font, integrate it better.

Warlike: Luuuuurve this anime, so glad to see it get some attention here. The only thing I really didn't feel was cohesive was her blasting off in the rocket, which was a bit odd of a transition from her being in bed sick. You might be able to just go straight to her face as she's walking on the moon, and perhaps stick afew more scenes in there. I dunno, this is just a suggestion, I like the track as it is anyway.

CodeZTM: You suuuuuck. Get another beta in already you lazy person!

AngelDragoon: I love you so much right now. PenguinDrum looks nice here, and you did a good job with the pacing and scene selection. Makes me want to work with this source even more now. :3 Zero complaints on my end.

Koneko: Work on the lip sync a bit. I think you could also speed up the scene pacing when he'stalking more quickly. Otherwise, really nicely done. :3 Although these lyrics are a tad odd. XD

[TritioAFB]

Hmm Code, when you say 'When he's talking more quickly' which part do you mean? Since I also collabed in Koneko's track?

[CodeZTM]

.... I'm not going to divulge how, but I was reviewing the completely wrong video for Koneko's (I was watching a beta for someone else on a different project). But I find it hilarious that I'd also point out here that I also think the lip sync needs a little more work. XD I also wanted to say that the graphic cutouts at 1:20ish don't look appealing.

Otherwise, nicely done.

[AngelDragoon]

Posted a second beta. Slowed down the beginning a little bit and tweaked a couple of scenes, but other than that there's not much of a change. XD;

@Koneko:

Spoiler :

Good stuff! Really cute and fits well with the MEP. My only suggestion so far is perhaps with the lip syncing at :19 with the mom, either make the scene stay the same size, (instead of zooming in), or zoom in more for a greater impact.

[Koneko]

:3 thanks all but credit should go to Tritio since he made 60% of the beta, it was also made with his laptop when he was out during the day, and he made several corrections during the process

[TritioAFB]

Ah don't worry Koneko

But next time don't get nervous because I'm looking you how you're editing your part. It was nice to see again SnMM in amvs after The Voice of a Kawaii Generation

Ok my beta will be finished in some hours

Hurry up the rest of participants because the time for the premiere is slowly coming