CodeZTM wrote:I might suggest adding a darker themed look to the house and everything though. It looks just a little too bright for everything.
x2. The scenes are perfectly creepy on their own but the mood doesn't feel very scary because it's bright. You could strengthen the blue colouring around the sky probably just to give it more of a "night" feel. I LOVE the font for the names though, it looks like they're written in blood. Code's track
: Any chance of switching either 0:10 or 0:14 with an alternative? Just they look kinda similar. Also you might want to cut the zombie whacking one at around 0:23 a few frames shorter, feels a little slow. I think the problem with the pacing is that you're synching to the lyrics rather than the beats, which is different for a change so it's not necessarily bad. In fact the only scenes I find pretty slow are the ones with the zombies just waving their heads about, not very exciting or frightening to be honest but if you don't want to change it, I find it OK for the moment.
Also you might want to try a bit of colouring like this:
If I remember correctly you have After Effects right? If it helps I can send you the project file so you can see how I did the colouring? I'm not really good with colouring so I can only help you a little...but I think it'll be a nice experiment to try out for your track.