There are only two things I would like to point out. First - the first two scenes are kind of unfitting I'd say... or maybe it's just the first one > it just doesn't really follow up as good as the rest. And second - the last 3 scenes are kind of off beat I'd say. Other than that it's pretty awesome!
MystykAMV wrote:Hitori: it's good, you can send the final
MelyoraMel: very nice progress, it is much better as Aimo mentioned there are quite a few lip flaps, also, at the end, you should do something with the blue coloring, because I think it is too strong, and the zoom on the last scene is too fast (or you zoom too much), but it is really a lot better
if there's anyone who hasn't seen my previous beta then don't be afraid to tell me, I'm just saying this because I'll be using the KimiKiss Pure Rouge track, so if you'd like to see, either tell me, or you'll see it with the Full MEP beta the next time
MelyoraMel wrote:Okay, I'll try and correct that all. Thanks guys! ^_^ Problem with that blue scene is, that it's original, so it's this blue in the anime, but I think I can dim it with some greyscale =)
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