Tritio: To be honest, I hadnt noticed those nose things at all until Mystyk pointed them out xD! I love the text now, it really looks like they were there to begin with ^^! I have the feeling that the later it is in the track, the more dull the colors get. For example, the colors in the beginning are nice and bright, but at the ending the color seems a bit dull. For the rest, I really like it :3!
Code: I have to echo the others about the fighting scenes. A few fighting scenes would be good, but now there is mostly fighting, while it might be better if you focus on 'the love' xD. Also, I havent seen Tsubasa etc, but there was a scene I've seen in many AMVs, where there is some sort of glass between them and they look at eachother. I think that scene and sort of scenes would fit better in your MEP track. And, because my track is behind yours, I dont think that the blood really fits. My song is about someone wanting to run away (think about a couple having a fight (a quarrel I think you call it in English) and then you have some sort of idea what my part is about (or it is just about wanting to run away from something). I dont know the story line of this anime, so 2 of the same persons fighting eachother looks kind of... weird. I am NOT saying that the fighting scenes are bad, not at all, but I do like the moments when he protects her and she hugs him more. You could do a zoom-in into sn eye and than a zoom-out from another eye as transition (for example at 0:25 her eye zoom-in - 0:26 his closed eyes zoom-out). My suggestion sometimes turn out to be crap suggestions but I think it is worth a try to try it out. A little bit more contrast to intensify those beautiful colors might look better too.
Hitori: The transitions are overused. Zoom-ins will look good too, for example at 0:04: from the scene of her head towards her eyes. And at 0:11 the same. Her sitting next to the other girl and then zoom-in. A bit further in the MEP part where you do quicker scenes... I dont think you should use the transition there. I really like the transition, I do, but I think zoom-ins and pushes would really look better. For the example of zoom-ins I suggest you look at MelyoraMel's beta, she has nice zoom-ins. Maybe, but this is just in my view, black and white might look good. Sorry if you find it annoying that everyone is repeating the same about the flashes etc, I just had to point it out too ><.
I am sorry for my inactivity! I have been really busy with MEP parts lately and they all had a set deadline that cannot not be moved (for example, the Halloween MEP ;P). I have to admit that I havent worked on my part alot lately. I have fixed the ending and I have done clip selection for the beginning of my part, but I hope to be able to finish my MEP part by the end of this week.