CascadaThon 3-FINISHED!!

[Kousaka]

Thanks for the critique, everyone! I'll start working on it right away! 8D Also, since Code mentioned it, everyone who hasn't seen Cardfight!! Vanguard should watch it. It's a little boring at the beginning, but it gradually gets better.

Inan, the only thing I didn't like about the betas was the sliding effects. I just think they need a little work, not necessarily taken out altogether. And if you're bored of editing with that show, definitely mix them. I really think Denpa fit, and doesn't need to be changed.

[-Kyros-]

I had some problems at home
Tomorrow I give an opinion on various tracks released
Sorry

[-Kyros-]

@Code

I liked your track a bit slightly yaoi
I do not like the lip flaps at 0:17 and maybe towards at the end needs more impact scenes (maybe you could use a bit of pan crop) or add a scene of explosion

@iCardioidAMV

Beautiful even your
I did not like the black part at 0:12, even the scene from 0:15 to 0:20 and at certain points I have noticed some ghosting

@Inan

Beta 1 : now flows better , at 0:10 maybe creates a linear passage

Beta 2 : I really enjoyed this track and I have nothing to report

[-Kyros-]

@SatoshiSakura

Not Bad
I don't like the part that goes from 0:00 to 0:13.
I think you have to concentrate more to select the most dynamic scenes rather than effects (the change in brightness don't like) , from 0:13 to 0:20 the selection is good , at the other end tries to undertake action scenes (and maybe you do spend some scenes of the kiss)
You are attentive to Aspect Ratio looks like you got a source in 720x480 , is you do not know how to dispose of black vertical edges I'll explain how to do

[SatoshiSakura]

@SatoshiSakura

Not Bad
I don't like the part that goes from 0:00 to 0:13.
I think you have to concentrate more to select the most dynamic scenes rather than effects (the change in brightness don't like) , from 0:13 to 0:20 the selection is good , at the other end tries to undertake action scenes (and maybe you do spend some scenes of the kiss)
You are attentive to Aspect Ratio looks like you got a source in 720x480 , is you do not know how to dispose of black vertical edges I'll explain how to do

All right, I'll try and get those worked out, thanks!
Wow, sorry, I completely missed that 720x480, that's what happens when I edit late at night.

[Inan]

@SatoshiSakura

Not Bad
I don't like the part that goes from 0:00 to 0:13.
I think you have to concentrate more to select the most dynamic scenes rather than effects (the change in brightness don't like) , from 0:13 to 0:20 the selection is good , at the other end tries to undertake action scenes (and maybe you do spend some scenes of the kiss)
You are attentive to Aspect Ratio looks like you got a source in 720x480 , is you do not know how to dispose of black vertical edges I'll explain how to do

All right, I'll try and get those worked out, thanks!
Wow, sorry, I completely missed that 720x480, that's what happens when I edit late at night.

im starting to like the beta more now, one suggestion is the clip where he throws the little lab coat instead of whatever u did with the clip now how about masking it? that way its a little different and maybe look better

[Hagaren Viper]

Alright, I'm back and more or less alive again.

Icard:

x2. And for 0:15 when it splits into the boxes, I feel like it should change scenes at the first beat before it expands. The positioning of the boxes could also be straightened a bit since it feels like they're being scaled at different rates. Oh and a gradual fade to black&white might help with the mood too. I'm not too sure about the lipsync at 0:26 either....but otherwise the energy is really great and upbeat and I'm liking it so far. ^^

Basically x2 to this. Getting nitpicky, the very beginning seems synced but at around 0:07-0:14 the scene changes seem less synced, so that could be looked at.
Also, the scene at 0:26 seems to drag a bit, maybe cut it after the "I like to move it" lyric?
The track is pretty sweet though, I honestly didn't think I'd see a good AMV to this series so it's a nice surprise


Code:
Fabulous~ I like the added Yu scenes.

My only gripe at this point is that I find myself missing Kanji's epic punch...maybe you can put it before he obtains his tarot card or something?


Inan? Or whoever it was that had the Chaos Head track:
Not many complaints here. Probably just because I haven't watched the show, but I don't know how 0:17-0:20 relates to your story at all? I like the glowy stuff at the end.

Inan [Skip Beat]:
Again, because I haven't seen the show, Im confused about who this blonde haired chick is near the end? Otherwise no complaints.

Inan [Blue hair chick]:


I'm pretty sure one of these isn't Inan's though. EVERY TRACK I DONT KNOW IS NOW INAN.

[Inan]

Inan? Or whoever it was that had the Chaos Head track:
Not many complaints here. Probably just because I haven't watched the show, but I don't know how 0:17-0:20 relates to your story at all? I like the glowy stuff at the end.

Inan [Skip Beat]:
Again, because I haven't seen the show, Im confused about who this blonde haired chick is near the end? Otherwise no complaints.

Inan [Blue hair chick]:


I'm pretty sure one of these isn't Inan's though. EVERY TRACK I DONT KNOW IS NOW INAN.

[Kousaka]

Thanks everyone for the critique! I'll be sending out a full beta soon

SatoshiSakura: I actually do like the brightness changes, but it gets to be a little overbearing. Maybe drag them out a bit more? At around 0:10 - 0:11, although the scene selection is good, maybe a clip of Eve!Nezumi would be better. Just a suggestion though because the scene that's already there is fine too. Also, if you can fit it in somewhere, include the "goodnight" kiss too.

[TwilightChrono]

Looks like we are on track for a AAC Premiere. What do you think Code?